Sunday 1 December 2013

Critiquing Jessica's Blog

Hi Jessica,

I like your blog! It matches your personality -simple but full of quality!The way you write grabs my attention. I like the fact that you seem so natural and down to earth when communicating with the world. You still maintained professionalism and you writing skills are excellent! The color you selected is not bright but I imagine that you wanted a newspaper effect, which is not a bad idea. The white on it makes it easy to read and also the colors of the videos and spreadsheet put a hint of life on it. The only thing I believe you could have done was to upload the other things we did, as they relate to your reflections, so the reader could see examples of what was actually learnt. I know it was difficult for most of with uploading, but it is not too late to do that as we need the practise.

Good Luck Jessica with EDET when you get to the classroom. I think you will do an excellent job!

Kind regards,

Laetitia